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I was staring into a pond….

A koi pond. My little heart was racing.

I hated birds. Dad knew it. He would know I did it on purpose.

When Dad moved out, I had thought my joy would double. Two Christmases, two birthdays, and amazing presents, each parent would have to try harder. But Dad bought a coy pond. Then a parakeet. Then a doberman.

He forgot to buy me a birthday present.

Dad came home. Out back, I was staring into the koi pond like I hadn’t let the bird loose. Like I hadn’t called the dog’s attention to it, emancipated and flightless.

It was beautiful.

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Title by: ponderthis1
Story by: Nick

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  1. Herm says

    “Coy” pond? I’m trying to work out if that’s an intentional misspelling of koi, and what deep meaning it hides…

  2. Nick says

    Haha… no, that was unintentional. Whoopsies!



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